Just Getting Started

'Comments' Poetry... because of Writerski7.

Smooth

 

You changed my life…

and then you changed it back.

 

Smooth move.

 

 

Hey Girls

 

Stop getting boyfriends.

It makes it really difficult to hit on you.

Wait until I’m dating one of you,

and then carry on.

 

 

Reiterate

 

Sometimes I'll hear a song

I used to hate,

and think to myself, "Wow,

this really makes me wanna stab myself in the ear.

Still."

 

 

Sunrise

 

So, I was watching the sunrise,

and it dawned on me.

 

 

To Those It May Concern

 

Be polite and tip pizza delivery drivers well…

They know where you live.

Author's Note

Grain of salt, my friends.

Reviews

[deadly healer]

i was laughing the whole time i was reading this as well. i thought the girl part was kinda funny. and it is true that pizza delivery guys do know where you live. lol. i adored this poem. hardly anything makes me laugh anymore and you proved that i actully can still laugh. thanks for that btw. i love your work. its cool to have a break from all the stress for once and be able to read this hilarious stuff. keep writing dude. ur awesome.

[Undying Glory]

interesting work, this is certainly unique. great work

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if it were up to me
I'd leave it up to you

[November_Rain]

My new fav poem now! this is excellent, very well written.

[Natalie]

This is quite unusual, but very clever. Couldn't expect less, though.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

There is sort of a kind understated wisdom in the words.
There was humor that laid a sweet coat of humility. It makes
the reader trust. I liked the part about the pizza. Very creative.

[emmajoy]

Laughing at the come and go of this, seems to be turning on an axis and covering a few points, not sure where or who to! Like the format and the subtitles tho they're like asides in a way.

Unusual, interesting and fun

[Alicante lullaby]

i love how it kilters.unconventional and i'm lovin' its queer taste.

[aftervision]

i feel every line of this one my poet

[deeps]

I really enjoyed this write here.
This is very well written.
Cute too.

[A.Lee]

Little observations turned into poetry. Not bad :) I really liked the last two though.