Just Getting Started

'Comments' Poetry... because of Writerski7.

Smooth

 

You changed my life…

and then you changed it back.

 

Smooth move.

 

 

Hey Girls

 

Stop getting boyfriends.

It makes it really difficult to hit on you.

Wait until I’m dating one of you,

and then carry on.

 

 

Reiterate

 

Sometimes I'll hear a song

I used to hate,

and think to myself, "Wow,

this really makes me wanna stab myself in the ear.

Still."

 

 

Sunrise

 

So, I was watching the sunrise,

and it dawned on me.

 

 

To Those It May Concern

 

Be polite and tip pizza delivery drivers well…

They know where you live.

Author's Note

Grain of salt, my friends.

Reviews

[deadly healer]

i was laughing the whole time i was reading this as well. i thought the girl part was kinda funny. and it is true that pizza delivery guys do know where you live. lol. i adored this poem. hardly anything makes me laugh anymore and you proved that i actully can still laugh. thanks for that btw. i love your work. its cool to have a break from all the stress for once and be able to read this hilarious stuff. keep writing dude. ur awesome.

[Kristen]

Interesting and a fun read, nice job.

[Anna Kay]

o my god! i love this but the only thing tht got me confused was the 'This really makes me wanna stab myself in the ear,
Still." but besides tht i love it!
-Anna Kay

[<3 Simply Rebekah <3]

I love how you broke it into sections and made it one poem!
sweet!
my fave part was
"Hey Girls
Hey girls,
Stop getting boyfriends
It makes it really difficult to hit on you
Wait until I’m dating one of you
And then carry on."
It was very cute (in the funny way)
the poem kinda made me giggle a little and smile too!
I really like this,
it's fo sho going in my faves (library) :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. I had to read a few times. The set-up made the poem a interesting read. Your style of writer is very good. Always a pleasure to read your words.
Coyote

[indieRokker]

indeed, very crafty. Amusing piece (:

indie♥

[Lone Shadow]

Clever.

[Lilly]

Such a great piece. Interesting, unique - love the format of it too.
Great work.

[Jade (insanity)]

Hahahaha
I liked it! It was funny :]
I must agree with 'Hopeless Ghost', I loved the last one.
Great Job
Jade

[These Haunted Hallways]

lol, absolutely so true here lol! Loved the last one lol!

M.

[Katie L]

i like this one it's kool.