Candle Haiku
A Poem by GunMetal
 From the wick. 
With smoke as my shame, I am killing the candle by feeding the flame.
© 2012 GunMetal
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Brilliant, it tells a story...in such short manner..
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Excellent , great imagery.
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Oh my, this is incredible. The simplicity makes it outstanding. Bravo. (:
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Wow... short, but perfect!
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possibly the very best senryu I have ever read, how could I resist, I stared at it, fighting the urge, but it won, as you knew it would, it's just too brilliant to just not.
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Love it.
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very nice
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I liked this!! well done indeed
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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So much can be said with very few words. Well done.
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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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29 Reviews
Shelved in 9 Libraries
Added on August 31, 2012
Last Updated on August 31, 2012
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GunMetalWish You Were Here, Alta Loma, CA
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