Ink

The promise of tomorrow hung in the air, 

 Like crisp morning dew. 

 I wet my pen with ink as black as my soul.

 I stare at the blank paper.

 You gave me a poem to write. 

 A new chapter has unfold. 

 Still, the visions of us never stopped. 

 This suffocating silence haunts me. 

 May my tormented soul find peace.

 May my ink lead me somewhere kind.

Author's Note

A recent heartbreak made me write again.
But something wonderful will come out of this, right? -Right.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Dramatic and raw words, wondering if, in a way, they are luring the the 'once was' back closer?

' A new chapter has unfold.
Still, the visions of us never stopped.
This suffocating silence haunts me. '

Those three lines and that added picture have so much power that surely nothing and nobody dare stand in their way"

[Deco]

A person who endeavors to write(to be this kind of artist) has had to make trek through pain, but the act is a remedy to the myalgia. Good work!

[Gee]

Did you find “ wonderful “ Giulia ?
You put over the pain of heartbreak very well :)

[Arundass TP]

Powerful lines, great imaginary

[Mustafa Merchant]

Well I can say how much I can relate. Heart breaks give you words that means allot than it’s usual vocabulary. Haven’t asked any one to have a read at my poems. But may be you could have a look and find peace in knowing you ain’t the only one.

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and words. Dear Giulia. You made the reader feel the words and they understood them.
"May my tormented soul find peace.
May my ink lead me somewhere kind."
I believe when we reach the dead-end, we must find some kind of light. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Alessander]

As Cobain once said, "thank you tragedy. I needed you for my art"

Seems like heart ache can inspire more than other intense emotions.
But be wary of the melancholy muse.

Enjoyed it.

[LylaCrystal]

Tears transform into ink, which in turn will write a beautiful story for the future. After rain, the sun always shines :) Wonderfully done! Lots of hugs

[Quill]

my friend, your ink would surely laed you somewhere kind, lovely written.

[sonnie ibadah]

The raw emotion is riveting. Heartbreaks can be a great motivation to a writer because when your are vulnerable you are honest. Your heart feels burdened unless you bleed those feeling out in form of words.

And yes, heartbreaks suck and everyone will tell you that it gets better in time. True. But I also believe that you can either wait for it to get better or you can get stronger.