Devilish

"Come on!" 

Said the boy with the gorgeous looks and devilish smile.

"What could possibly go wrong?" 

- Everything, she thought. 

"Nothing" she blurted out, and went lost into her own world. 

"I've been trying to hold onto days," he said, "because sometimes the nights get too dark for me,

So," he said, once again, "come with me."

He was a living, breathing, dangerous poetry.

He was the only one that could rip my heart out of my beating chest and ignite a spark.

Then a flame.

We were the constellations, 

The stars that shine so brightly,

The moonlit sky in the darkest of nights. 

Not knowing what this dark night had to offer, 

She took his hand and felt the storm within her suddenly go quiet. 

"Ready?" 

Author's Note

Not my best piece. Just some words I had to get out of my head. Will edit it more in the future. x

Reviews

[Ardra]

He was the only one that could rip my heart out of my beating chest and ignite a spark.
Then a flame.

mmmmm before we know it we are walking the path of darkness, towards the edge of destruction is feels like , the storms waiting to unleash its fury on us, but we walk as if under the spells of the stars calling us to go on walk rite into the eye of the storm.... :)

i really liked this one ..

[Giulia King]

I'm happy you liked this one :) Thanks for reading

[Najam Us Saher]

You have expressed the thoughts and the emotions that people have in their hearts. That hesitation has been expressed really well.

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much for your words, Najam!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Pete]

we become vulnerable when we allows ourselves to love / be loved. nothing better than being as one in relationship. could go amiss and hurt but well worth the risk as we search for that elusive soul mate. what else is there really? so we "go for it." nice ending. there is a daring innocence to this - like walking on clouds. can see that you have a passionate heart. cool pic, catchy title ...

[Giulia King]

You're spot on, absolutely right, Pete. Thank you so much for this review, bro :)

[heavenscentgirl1]

Guillia, this is a sad but beautiful poem that many will be able to relate to and understand. The picture fits very well with your words.

Thanks for sharing your heartfelt words with us.

Blessings,
~ hsg

[Giulia King]

I'm so happy you like this one :) Thank you so much for reading.