Devilish

"Come on!" 

Said the boy with the gorgeous looks and devilish smile.

"What could possibly go wrong?" 

- Everything, she thought. 

"Nothing" she blurted out, and went lost into her own world. 

"I've been trying to hold onto days," he said, "because sometimes the nights get too dark for me,

So," he said, once again, "come with me."

He was a living, breathing, dangerous poetry.

He was the only one that could rip my heart out of my beating chest and ignite a spark.

Then a flame.

We were the constellations, 

The stars that shine so brightly,

The moonlit sky in the darkest of nights. 

Not knowing what this dark night had to offer, 

She took his hand and felt the storm within her suddenly go quiet. 

"Ready?" 

Author's Note

Not my best piece. Just some words I had to get out of my head. Will edit it more in the future. x

Reviews

[Ardra]

He was the only one that could rip my heart out of my beating chest and ignite a spark.
Then a flame.

mmmmm before we know it we are walking the path of darkness, towards the edge of destruction is feels like , the storms waiting to unleash its fury on us, but we walk as if under the spells of the stars calling us to go on walk rite into the eye of the storm.... :)

i really liked this one ..

[Giulia King]

I'm happy you liked this one :) Thanks for reading

[KCthelastboyscout]

Nice little moment to read.overwhelmed with anticipation.I like the build up in anxiety in the female character. Well done

[Giulia King]

Thank you, KC! :))

[Jamieya B-Johnson]

Well put together. I enjoy this as if I stood in the midst of the scene.

[Giulia King]

I'm happy you could visualize it :) Thank you for reading

[Lovecraft]

That picture fits the poem magnificently. I like the idea that she takes a chance on the unknown while knowing very well it could end up as a disaster.

[Giulia King]

Exactly! Thank you for reading :))

[Karmee]

I liked this, I thought it was a really good write.

[Giulia King]

I'm happy you liked my poem :)

[Red Rose]

There is something quite magical in all of your writings.. It draws me in. And I believe we both share the same love for stars and the sky..
"He was a living, breathing, dangerous poetry."
This line is simply beautiful and haunting.
You are capable of a lot and one day I hope I become as good as you are..

[Giulia King]

Oh, wow. A million thanks for this amazing review! I'm so happy you like my poems. This review truly made my day :) You're a good writer!!

[Donicca Dona L]

Simply beautiful , ehh this kind of danger romance we always fall for that :)

[Giulia King]

We sure do :) Thank you for reading!

[Cecelia A. Green]

I thought this was a great piece! The fact that she knew everything could possibly go wrong and still took that leap of faith with him is what makes love beautiful!

[Giulia King]

Exactly! :) Thank you for reading, Cecelia

[Unspoken poet]

WOW!! So awesome, enjoyed this a lot.

[Giulia King]

I'm happy you enjoyed it! Thank you :)

[Elizabeth Gallegos]

This is a great poem. I could visualize this scene so clearly.

[Giulia King]

Thank you for reading! :) xx