I crave the love that doesn't hurt - the love that's always there - the love that will envelop us without expecting a single thing in return - the love that comes when you finally put aside your craving / wanting / need ... now that's an endless love
I like the sentiment of your poem ... best wishes for the muse X
After reading your poem, I immediately added it to my favorites. I loved it! I have never come across a piece that so perfectly describes the intense longing and selflessness that comes with being in love. Wonderfully and masterfully done.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
That makes me so happy! Thank you so, so much, Fanicia! :)
6 Years Ago
I'm glad I could put a smile on your face. You're welcome!
I assume this person was the love of your life or in your imagination you want to find a person who will make you feel this way. This is beautifully written.Something enjoyable to read to caress your heart
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you for your lovely words and for always putting a smile on my face :)
I rarely use the word "sensual" in reviews, but this cusps that line between smoother than glass and bolder than bold... It flits between the ups and downs of passion within a pristine meter and flow... Very romantically penned... Gotta love love...
Posted 7 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Gotta love love indeed. Thank you for your lovely words, Silente! :)
After we had tasted true love. We try to reach again dear Giullia.
"My beloved one,
I want to write about how every word that falls off your lips
can put poetry to shame."
The above lines are true. When surrounded by love. No better days and nights. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
It Says most things i struggle to put to words. I am more intoxicated with how each section begins with what appears to be a heading but to me sounds more like a different yet growing deeper statestage of love.
Thanks for the journey :-)
Well worth reading.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
I'm so happy my piece took you on a journey! :) Thank you for reading!
You made me feel that passion and love you've described. I loved the third stanza most above all. This poem is heart touching. Beautifully written.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
I'm happy my piece made you feel something. That's my goal in my writer life. I want the reader to t.. read moreI'm happy my piece made you feel something. That's my goal in my writer life. I want the reader to think and feel when they're reading my poems. :)
Awesome (check my reviews - I never use that word!)
But I guess you're preaching to the converted (n my case, having been lucky to have experienced this once in my life) - to clumsily use an oft coined phrase because you aren't 'preaching' per se...you're allowing the reader the feel that wondrous thing called love (in it's purest sense).
Awesome ! D****t - that's becoming annoying already.
:))
Posted 7 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
That's true, you never do. I feel special :)) Thank you so much, TJ! I'm happy you like my piece. Aw.. read moreThat's true, you never do. I feel special :)) Thank you so much, TJ! I'm happy you like my piece. Awesomesauce, lol.
wow. doesn't get much deeper than this. such passion & raw emotion. we all want to be loved and to have someone to love. so many great lines. especially love the opening and "You are the sunlight through the windows of my room." the feelings expressed here will surely melt a heart. outstanding. you've outdone yourself ...
Posted 7 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your lovely review, dear Pete :) Your words mean a lot to me!