Oceans Away

Alone he sits, accompanied by the night sky. 

Forever devoted to a queen who's destined to always be beyond his reach. 

. . . 

Author's Note

*Congratulations!
Your poem Oceans Away has been awarded 5 in the The magic of poetry writing contest.*

Reviews

[Hi]

Forever is a long time. Sad.

[Giulia King]

It sure is, but not enough for some people.

[Relic]

Short but puts it into perspective. I've been there.

[Giulia King]

Thank you for reading and for leaving a nice review :)

[emmajoy]

Lke a few careful brushstrokes, a few hear-felt words can create a tale that's impossible to forget. Beautiful.

[Pete]

poignant and longing, but very elegantly says so much with well crafted wording. conjures powerful imagery and tells a story. catchy title.

[Giulia King]

It's an honor, that such an amazing writer like you, like my poem. Thank you, Pete!

[Pete]

Don't sell yourself short. You write from the heart. It's a pleasure to read your writing.

[Giulia King]

You're right. Thank you so much, Pete!

[Lovecraft]

Short but beautiful in its simplistic elegance. A love that may never go away.

Good work, Kingy.

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much for this lovely review 😊 I'm happy you liked it!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Your writes always have this ethereal quality which I abs adore, Gullia! 'always be beyond his reach', this brought a sigh... Enchanting write. And nice to read your pieces again, my friend

[Giulia King]

Thank you for your amazing words, dear friend! They mean a lot to me :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Always a pleasure, Gullia. You're welcome 😊💜

[Giulia King]

❤️❤️ .

[Jon Roggie]

Still, he has the stars.
Nice write.

[Giulia King]

The most magical thing in the world. Thank you for reading :)

[Daz]

I love the you write. Like Jacob said, so haunting, at the same time comforting.
The art of romance agrees with you I would say. Beautiful imagery all around.

[Giulia King]

A million thanks, Remi! Your uplifting review brought a smile on my face.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such haunting, sad lines...but so beautiful...much said with such brevity.

[Giulia King]

Im happy you like this one, Jacob! Hope all is well with you :)