Stardust

She takes a deep breath and sighs. "Oh darling"  

She whispers into the darkness. 

"If our souls are made out of stardust, then how come my skin feels like a desert?"  

The depths of her soul lives in poetry, 

in a in-between world with him. 

"You're the brightness of a star,  

The magic in my life." 

"You're the only secret my heart guards."  

She says as she gently puts her arms around him and blissfully drifts off into infinity. 

Reviews

[Crowley]

The pic and poetry are so perfectly matched. This vibrates at an almost eerie frequency, the line about the skin like a desert lends a weird reality to it as the other lines are all fabulously supernatural. Great writing.

[Jamieya B-Johnson]

Nicely and elegantly done

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much! :)

[LylaCrystal]

An entire story said nine verses. This is something incredible.

~Lyla

[Giulia King]

Thank you for your lovely words, Lyla! :))

[Poetic Beauty]

Oh this is beautiful. Has a relaxed romantic feel.

[Giulia King]

I was going for that relaxed romantic feel :) Thank you for reading!

[Dave]

Love can do that to you. A cataclysmic burst of the universe cannot contain the depth, the broad expanse of the love you wish to share with him and hope he wishes to share his with you. I like what you have to say.

[Giulia King]

Sorry for the delay here, Dave. Thank you for your review :)

[Alessander]

Very intimate and tender.

The cosmic vastness and distance of stars wrapped around her loving embrace.

[Giulia King]

Thank you for your lovely review :)

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a sacred transcendence in this loving, the universe rising to echo each sigh. It made me feel the deep vibrations that rise between twin flame lovers. Profound, infinite magic.

[Giulia King]

Infinite magic, I love that! Thank you so much :)

[Chris]

Yes, there IS magyk in the world and within ...us. And we touch it when we find ways we interact and give voice to what WE as individuals feel so that a separate someone understands. You did that here.

[Giulia King]

A million thanks for this amazing review, Chris!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

such a happy feeling i had after reading this poem...great one.

[Giulia King]

Your review made me happy :) Thank you for reading

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure....

[Re-Pete]

so happy and uplifting. greatest feeling in the world in the arms of those we love.