Lost Soul

"My love," she said with mesmerizing eyes. 

"You have touched me and I have grown."

 

He looked at her and smiled. 

Thinking he finally found his lost soul.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Crowley]

Wow, you could take that a couple of ways, I guess that's what great writing does, it makes you choose for yourself what the real intent is, and in this case both outcomes are super delicious. Loved this!!!

[wredit.jordan]

This is a cute piece. The dialogue is very believable and I love the picture you have chosen for this.

[BlackPrince]

This is a straightforward true and deep poem that resonates with a lot of lovers across the world.
It is simple yet deep in its universal appeal, in saying much with little.
You have a unique way with words, and I admire that.

[Giulia King]

Thank you for your wonderful words! They mean a lot to me :)

[Ghost]

Oh I know how he feels when I look a friend I feel I have found my soul, my home, my life... This is romantic, simple and warm.. Thank you for sharing..

[Giulia King]

And thank you for reading! :)

[ReedWrite]

Simple. Sweet. Touching. Deep.
Nicely done.

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much for reading. :)

[LylaCrystal]

Helping those who are dear to us to grow can make us discover ourselves and evoluate together to something better. There is one thing to say, three words for you: incredible writing skills.

~Lyla

[Giulia King]

Thank you dear Lyla for your amazing words! xo

[Chris]

Had me thinking of sitting in a Diner's booth well after 2 AM, holding a hand and lost to the world as the sun rose - in HER eyes.

[Giulia King]

This is amazing, Chris!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

you are wonderful.....pretty write!

[Giulia King]

So are you! Thank you :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

In the game of finder's keepers this is a big one!

regards,
al

[Giulia King]

Thanks for reading, Al!

[Coyote Poetry]

In a few words. You said everything. Thank you Gullia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Giulia King]

Thank you for reading, dear friend

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Gullia.