My World

"Stop thinking about it" He said.

"It's not the end of the world."

"I know" she answered with trembling lips.

"But it's the end of my world."

Author's Note

Sunday scribble. Be kind, always.

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This touched me on a deeper level. Really, it does seem like the end of one's world when someone or something you hold dear goes missing...
The photo casts a mesmerizing effect (now that I see it clearly lol) ;)
Nicely penned, Gullia :)

[Giulia King]

Thank you for your kind words, dear Yumna! I'm happy you liked this one :) Haha, I know you like the pic too!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Gullia! Always 😊💜

[Jes' Pi]

Simple&meaningful. You put the words right.

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much :)

[Stacy Purvis]

Simple, yet Brilliant. Thank you for sharing!

[Giulia King]

Thank you for reading! :)

[Writing Angel]

very small but very touching I loved this...

[Giulia King]

I'm happy you loved it!

[Isabella Ivy]

This is very good! An enormous concept in a small space, which is always harder for me. My only suggestion would be not to repeat the word 'said' (unless you're purposely going for a 'he said, she said' statement. I think it carries more poetical weight to put, 'she responded', or 'she answered'. Tell me your thoughts :) Thank you for the read request! I.I.

[Giulia King]

Thank you, Isabella :)

[Isabella Ivy]

You're most welcome :)

[William Liston]

Such a powerful message in so few words ... I feel like the author's note summed it up nicely : )

- William Liston

[Giulia King]

Thank you, William :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

This is amazing! 😍
Thanks for sharing

[Giulia King]

Thank you for reading! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Wow its just amazing gullia😊

[Giulia King]

Thank you, Farhan!

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Love it!
:) Sunday writes are often reflective.

[Giulia King]

Sunday writes are the best :) I'm happy you love it :)

[Valentine]

Nice scribble. A lot said in just a few words. Valentine

[Giulia King]

Thank you, Kathie :)