My World

"Stop thinking about it" He said.

"It's not the end of the world."

"I know" she answered with trembling lips.

"But it's the end of my world."

Author's Note

Sunday scribble. Be kind, always.

Reviews

[prachi prangya agasti]

Lovely piece. Just right and short...

[Giulia King]

Thank you, Prachi!

[Tabby Mac]

Love the picture with this piece!!! I always LOVE your work!! It's amazing! I like this piece! I love how you manage to make the voices in your pieces become alive to me! So much emotion in so few words! Awesome sauce!!
Tabby

[Giulia King]

That makes me so happy!! Thank you so much, Tabby! :)

[zaisham9393]

short and sweet, heartbreaking and breathtaking at the same time :)!
I loved it!

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much! :)

[MsJewel]

So much feeling and emotion in so few words. Well done :) Julie

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much for reading, Julie :)

[Joey Nizz]

Short, simple and deep
Its a well put dialogue
I'ts sad that they've giving up on life to think that their world is ending..
Thank for sharing.

[Giulia King]

Thank you for reading, Joey :)

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome ^^

[mercy party]

So sad when there is such a contrast between two people like this. Great presentation of it. Great creative write.

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked it :)

[yuhee]

Wow this is so deep. Perhaps the girl had different meaning of the world unlike to the boys. Beautiful piece

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much, MP!

[Kesha]

Aw this is sad, it's heartbreaking, short & simple but yet so deep and meaningful! nicely written :)

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much :)

[Kesha]

You're welcome, :)

[Tbear]

ITs these very short precise poems that pack the most meaning.. I might bold the my though for just a teeny bit more punch..

"But it's the end of MY world.

Thank you for sharing...write on..

[Giulia King]

I made it a bit bigger :) Thank you for your suggestion.

[BBP]

I love how you use dialogue in your poetry. So much power in that. You can tell a powerful little story in such little writing. That's talent dear! :)

[Giulia King]

Your review put a big smile on my face :) Thank you for your kind words!