My World

"Stop thinking about it" He said.

"It's not the end of the world."

"I know" she answered with trembling lips.

"But it's the end of my world."

Author's Note

Sunday scribble. Be kind, always.

Reviews

[Ted Kniffen]

Succinctly expresses the point of view of male and female very well. The somewhat callous boy and the sensitive girl play off each other and tell a complex story in a few well-written words. There is a great deal more to this interaction than is realized at first reading. If this is 'Sunday scribble' I'll take more.

Good write, Gullia.

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much, Ted! Sorry for the delay here .)

[APOORVA]

well said,
commendable job

[Giulia King]

Thank you, Apoorva

[Lovecraft]

Be kind? ;0

Hmm.....

It's somewhat sad and sweet. Seems to me the female has lost her purpose or the will to go on, whether metaphorically or literally.

Pretty good, Kingy!

[Giulia King]

Yes, be kind.!
Thank you so much :)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

The duality of perception - neatly and poetically explored in a few words - excellent!

[Giulia King]

Thank you for your kind words :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I've always been one who feels everything so deeply, and everything goes directly to my heart. That's the message this gives me, Gullia.

Your image is off the wall - incredible! Great thought process to compliment it!

[Giulia King]

Thank you for your amazing words, Kelly! I've always been like that too! :)

[Paul]

The feeling of sadness comes out of this short poem. As well as nicely written. Well done! I enjoyed reading this.

[Giulia King]

I'm happy you liked my poem, Paul :)

[Sikandar Khan]

Short Lines Explained So Much Bigger Thing......

[Giulia King]

Thank you for reading

[Coyote Poetry]

You said everything in the short poetry. Artwork and words. Outstanding work dear Gullia.
Coyote

[Giulia King]

Thank you dear friend!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Gullia.

[Tony Jordan]

I think to relate to this is to know this feeling and to know this feeling is very sad indeed.
Nicely conveyed Gullia.
:)

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much for reading, Tony :)

[boygene borice]

Love in few words. your poems has much in few words :)

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much! :)