Make a Wish

There's something hauntingly beautiful about the way she carries herself. 

Even if her heart is shattered in a million pieces, 

she's always mindful of the type of energy she surrounds herself with. 

And I am forever jealous of her relationship with the starry sky. 

. . . 

You.  

Her deep dark eyes searched for his. 

"You take me to places, I've never known before. 

How did you know my favorite thing is star gazing?" She asked. 

"I knew it, simply by the way your eyes light up when the sun goes down. 

No one fancies the darkness as much as you do."  

"It's not darkness to me", she says with a frown on her face. 

"There's something magical about the stars in the velvety sky."  

"What's so magical about it?" He asks. 

"You can close your eyes and make a wish and it will come true."  

"Do you trust me?"

"Always," he says. 

As she reaches out her hand to him she says,

"Close your eyes, make a wish and think of me."  

He takes her hand, 

closes his eyes 

and makes his last wish.

Author's Note

I hope you're not bored with my poems about stars. Enjoy. x

Reviews

[Tabby Mac]

LOVE YOUR POEMS!! They take me away for a moment in time. They remind me to go out and look at the stars at night just because! When I was younger I was constantly out watching the stars in the sky! Now I'm usually tired and go to bed! So that knyou for reminding me to go out and enjoy the beautiful sky!
I love the sweet message of this piece!!
Tabby

[Giulia King]

Oh wow, Tabby! Your review made me so, so happy! You have no idea! Thank you so much! :') Enjoy the little things in life, they are truly magical. Sending you a big hug!

[Tabby Mac]

Thank you!!! HUG BACK!!
Tabby

[Lexi Wilkins]

This is absolutely stunning.

[Giulia King]

Thank you, Lexi! :)

[Sapientiam]

There is so much beauty in your words. You can tell when someone is special just by looking into their eyes. The trust between these two people was sweet and I could tell that the wish made at the end was an eternal one (perhaps love...?). Anyways, great job!

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much for dropping by :) I'm so happy you liked this one! Exactly, the last wish was an eternal one :)

[aLittlePain]

Elegant piece of poetry! I love following your unfolding of thoughts here. They are bright and rich. Lovely pen. R xo

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much, lovely Ray! xo

[Jamey]

Always enamored by your work..I love the stars too

[Giulia King]

Wow, thank you Jamey! Your words put a big smile on my face :)

[Tbear]

So complete and yet has the ability to incite yet another poem.. I shall work on it right now..

[Giulia King]

Thank you! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful tale with a perfect ending. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to positive places and thoughts. Thank you Gullia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Giulia King]

Thank you, dear friend! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear friend.

[Kesha]

I enjoyed this piece alot, I'm glad you shared it, :) & if people are bored with your writing about stars tell em to eff off! haha just kidding, but I loved it ;)

[Giulia King]

Hahaha I will! :D Thank you so much for reading :) I'm so happy you liked it!

[Kesha]

You are so welcome :)

[Ardra]

Lovely conversation....stars have always fascinated me...I used to make wish on shooting star every time I see one....and I would wait and watch the sky to find one....it's been a long time now I made or saw any shooting stars.... now gazing at stars feels like luxury....
Keep writing....

[Giulia King]

Thank you, Ria! I haven't seen a shooting star in such a long time now.

[Najam Us Saher]

I also love looking at the stars. It was very well written. Thank you for sharing. ☺

[Giulia King]

It's magical! Thank you for reading :)