A whisper In The Wind

As she watches the clouds soar across the pink sky.  

A light breeze goes through her hair. 

Leaving her breathless. 

"I miss you," she finally breathes out.

"Colorful life, take me away. 

Lift me up from the depth of my soul.

Take me to a beautiful place where the moon smiles 

and a galaxy of stars are in your eyes." She whispers.

As she closes her eyes, 

she feels the wind whisper back to her. 

"Follow the voice of your own heart.

 Even if it leads you off the path of finding yourself. 

In due time, you will find yourself, 

as well as the other missing piece of your heart."

She gives the sky a shy smile. 

. . .

She feels the sun rays on her face, 

a new day started to dawn. 

Another beautiful day to be a victim of her own daydreams. 

Beautiful, but annihilating.

Author's Note

Just words on a boring Tuesday.

Reviews

[Biswajeet Samal]

i love those lines she feels the sun ray on her face a new day started to dawn. good one gullia

[Giulia King]

Thank you, Kevin!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Just words"? I wouldn't say that! It certainly carries a depth and hope of a new and better tomorrow..

"Follow the voice of your own heart. Even if it leads you off the path of finding yourself.
In due time, you will find yourself, as well as the other missing piece of your heart."

These lines are amazing! Great work as always, Gullia 👍

[Giulia King]

I'm always a bit hard on myself.. Thank you so much for your lovely words, Yumna! Means a lot :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! Always a pleasure, Gullia King! ☺

[Kasey Nichole]

Beautifully written. The imagery in this is amazing. I look forward to reading more of your writings in the future.

Great job!

-K

[Giulia King]

Thank you, Kasey :)
xo

[Lovecraft]

A beautifully doomed hopefulness seemed to drift among my mind when I read this. It's lovingly melancholic. Fairly good use of imagery pertaining to the majestic Heavenly bodies.

It's quite good for "Just words on a boring Tuesday." :0

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much for your lovely words! :) I'm so happy you liked it

[Lovecraft]

No problem, Milady. :0

[Tazeen Ahmed]

deep imagination
impassioned lines
"Follow the voice of your own heart. Even if it leads you off the path of finding yourself.
In due time, you will find yourself, as well as the other missing piece of your heart."
thank you for sharing!

[Giulia King]

Thank you for reading, Tazeen :)

[Valentine]

Some of my most joy lately comes from God's paintings in the sky and area around me. I love the scenic views He makes for us to enjoy. Valentine

[Giulia King]

I love it too :) Thank you for reading this one, Kathie

[mercy party]

a picturesque theme of false hope. i like how it starts with a daydream of a pink sky and then it ends with the word annihilating. That was effective!

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like it :)

[Tabby Mac]

This made my Tuesday come alive! Ha!
I loved the images this gave me! This is a beautiful piece! It speaks volumes to me. I really, really enjoyed it!!! Uplifting but sad. It's like you painted hope into this piece! Well penned!

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much, Tabby! Yaay, I'm so happy you like this one, it means a lot to me! :)

[Alessander]

Another beautiful day to be a victim of her own daydreams.
Beautiful, but annihilating.

Agree with Ana.

Serene, though the ending in some ways shatters the arcadian landscape

It's almost as if the narrator realizes it's all fleeting, or somehow, illusionary.

[Giulia King]

Thank you for reading this one, Alessander! I appreciate your words :)

[Alessander]

No problem.
Dig the pic too :)

[Ana B.]

Very serene image comes to mind when reading this. Peacefully beautiful write Gullia :)

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much, Ana! :) I appreciate your review