Gods Masterpiece

I can feel his eyes on me as I start to dance.

 Never stop watching me.

 Keep your eyes on me.

 Your body is a masterpiece, I can look at you forever and never get tired of your perfect imperfections. 

God took his time to craft your perfect curves and lines he said with mesmerizing eyes.

  I will follow you to the ends of the world, where forever isn't enough.

I am Gods masterpiece, I whispered with a smile on my face.

 Keep dancing, let him watch you. 

 Darkness fell and a new day started. 

 Didn't we have fun? Wasn't it a magical night? 

 You said forever, so forever I'll wait. 

 You took my soul and wiped it clean. Now all I have left is this dance of mine.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

it's very hard to me to write 'romance' cos, eroticism has already indulged me so badly so whenever it comes to "dance" and beautiful "perfect-imperfections", i oft. foster the beats of heart not to let 'em diverse. you here talk real and smooth. gentleness is all keep deflecting off an every edge of your verse, very dramatically. very nice metaphoric description. well licked!

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Gullia,
"God's Masterpiece" is very intricate. How complex is each human being; body, soul, spirit. We desire fullfillment and often go looking in all types of ways and places. Your poem spoke to me of this but the truth is much more simple. Our greatest love is in Jesus who loves us and will never leave nor forsake us. Blessings in your life and writing. Kathy

[Valentine]

God has made lots of masterpieces, I like the perfect imperfections line. Inner beauty cannot be seen...only felt. Valentine

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much Valentine!

[XO Vee]

Beautiful! You have such a creative way of bringing things across in your writing. I admire the fact that its so realistic in the sense where I feel every descriptive word and every action. I feel like I'm watching some say the things you write and do the things you said is done. Keep sharing !

[Giulia King]

A million thanks nony! That really means alot to me! Thank you for your kind words :) That's exactly what I'm aiming for when I share my poems

[Shannon]

Loss and mesmerizing love.

Very melodically written. I do wonder if there is a way to make the speaker more clear?

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much! :)