Gods Masterpiece

I can feel his eyes on me as I start to dance.

 Never stop watching me.

 Keep your eyes on me.

 Your body is a masterpiece, I can look at you forever and never get tired of your perfect imperfections. 

God took his time to craft your perfect curves and lines he said with mesmerizing eyes.

  I will follow you to the ends of the world, where forever isn't enough.

I am Gods masterpiece, I whispered with a smile on my face.

 Keep dancing, let him watch you. 

 Darkness fell and a new day started. 

 Didn't we have fun? Wasn't it a magical night? 

 You said forever, so forever I'll wait. 

 You took my soul and wiped it clean. Now all I have left is this dance of mine.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

it's very hard to me to write 'romance' cos, eroticism has already indulged me so badly so whenever it comes to "dance" and beautiful "perfect-imperfections", i oft. foster the beats of heart not to let 'em diverse. you here talk real and smooth. gentleness is all keep deflecting off an every edge of your verse, very dramatically. very nice metaphoric description. well licked!

[Govind singh]

What a piece....amazing... especially the last para was mind-blowing...the k u for sharing Ur wonderful thoughts:)

[Ghost]

So beautiful.. I have said so many times that I know the masterpiece in my life.. Your words flow so smooth and so simple with strong points to them... Thanks for sharing.

[Pete]

so true. He created us to dwell in us and with us. we are indeed his masterpieces. his eyes are upon us and when we smile he smiles and when we cry he cries. the imperfections are the good stuff that makes each of us unique. he delights in us. awesome piece. beautifully done. love the last line.

[Giulia King]

So true Pete! Thank you for reading :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words for love and dance.
" Your body is a masterpiece, I can look at you forever and never get tired of your perfect imperfections.
God took his time to craft your perfect curves and lines he said with mesmerizing eyes.
I will follow you to the ends of the world, where forever isn't enough."
The above lines are a perfect way, to express the words of love. Thank you Gullia for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Giulia King]

Thank you for your kind words!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Gullia. I enjoyed your work.

[Jamey]

You created a vivid image...I loved it

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much Jamey!

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Well crafted piece, it's quite dramatic adding atmosphere. Enjoyable read. Cheers Starz

[Giulia King]

Thank you Starz! :)

[Lizzy Morgan]

This was very beautiful and well written!! :)

[Giulia King]

Thank you so much!! :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Every person born on earth is God's masterpiece. The thing is to find the light in them and make them discover oneself. Nicely expressed emotions.

[Giulia King]

Exactly! Thank you so much

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome ☺

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Gullia

I can feel serenity in the poem. Lovely portray of devotion that is one of the key elements in true love.

[Giulia King]

Thank you for reading :)