Fire

A rapid action!!! really?

No no, it is not.

Seems faster and twitch

But it's not.

A hidden action!!! it's?

Hmm! it can be,

but not wholly covered

it's unnoticed.

Oh! unnoticed, how?

A slowest action, can be stopped.

Stopped, but why?

It's true, less initiates to stop.

Less initiates? what you talking about?

Oh dear! fire, it's fire.

A slowest gin and single strand,

joins others and unite.

Turn in explosion, when unite,

ashes the giants, rapidly.

And the anger is fire, initiated

by tiny to giants.

Author's Note

I tried after a long time.
Note- please read it as one child and an old man are talking. They are talking according to their experience.
Please tell me where I lacked in conveying my message.

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Eloquent words and dialogue with Unique style and form. Great metaphor “anger is fire”..the world is ablaze with anger. The old and young, rich and poor, strong and weak are clashing. God help us all. Important, relevant statement poem Gul!