A Darken Sin

A selfish human!

                                   

The world is painted black

with sins of human,

not heavy but heavier on shoulder,

not able to light a spot.

Foliage turned gray

in mourn and stress for doom.

Emerald wood yelp

to save his existence.

O! reckless man,

preserve us to save your existence.

O! Stupid, befriend, no foe

otherwise no land for your toe.

Author's Note

Need your support to gloom from a tiny bud.

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Haunting poem of warning to mankind about how evilly the earth and its creatures are used. We destroy our own earth and therefore our own life. Your last two lines tell it brilliantly! Brava Gul!

[Gul]

Thank you Annette, your words mean a lot. I am just trying to write my heart out, what I feel.

[AYVID N]

A dark and powerful writing with a brisk message for humans. Either shape up or ship out. Indeed Gul, its now or never for us.

[Gul]

Thanks a lot, Divya. yes, your are correct, its now or never for us.

[Gul]

Sorry it's bloom.

Need your support to bloom from a tiny bud.