Closed Eyes

In this world, we appreciate the bad sides, never seem to know and give attention to those grateful things we own.

Closed Eyes

Almost midnight to close my eyes

Almost time to bring myself back

Cheering Sounds i wish i hear

Surrounded by ungrateful tears

Seeing nothing but darkness

Clearing my heart i see tense

Stopping myself from thinking

That blur memories started sinking

Stars and moon came to light up

flowers and grass to color us

Paper and pencil to write at

Sound of cheers as i sat

Ashes to ashes why is it cold

Sadness to shed the tears i crawl

Happiness is waiting for you wont let it in

Come and open let us then begin

Thunders and lightning calling for you

O' strong waves appearing this way

Beginning of soul is not always like

Begging for happiness open and strike

Author's Note

Hey! So, this is my second poem i wrote last night. Enjoy!

Reviews

[Life and Love]

Thank you :)) really appreciate that ^_^

[Saddam]

Stars and moon came to light up
flowers and grass to color us
Paper and pencil to write at
Sound of cheers as i sat.

Wonderful and imaginative write dear.... It is well expressed.

[nazia]

U are creative and imaginative.... excellent descriptions :)