can they see..?

can they see..?

A Poem by Forbidden love

Do you think they can notice??

 

Hopefully they can't tell.

 

If they do it will be the end.

 

My identity must stay consealed.

 

Who i really am??

 

No one will ever know.

 

Or will they??

 

I guess that all depends..

 

are they determined enough to pin a face on the masked person??

 

Yes, they are determined.

 

But guess what..

 

I am slick.

 

Like a person wearing all black in the dead of night.

 

Hah- they won't be able to notice.

 

They won't be able to tell.

 

Not now..not ever

 

© 2008 Forbidden love


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pshhh.... GURRRRL.... eventually they will find out! I'm just saying!! I guess you the day you wrote this when you looked in the mirror you said "lookin good feelin good!" eh? "I am slick" mmm-hmm child boo!!!

Hey Mayonaise
WALK IT OFF... I dont think that one is ever going to get old lol

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 24, 2008
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Forbidden love
Forbidden love

Key West, FL



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I'm Cuban and I've come to be 17 years of age. Life on this place we call Earth is crazy. Need know more? Just ask.. more..

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