A Fairytail Set in Hell

You said you loved me

and that you truly cared

you said you'd never leave,

you'd always be there,

i never had to be afraid

because you would be my protector...

i thought there was something

between us i guess a kind of magic

because no matter how tough things got

and how much we cussed, we'd still end up

hugging..

over the year i soon realized

it wasn't magic at all

because instead of huggin and lovin

you was punchin walls

i knew i must've done somethine wrong although what i didn't know so i just sat there and tried to be the best there was in this cold world.

day in and day out things just got worse but insterad of hitting walls you just hit me first.

i sat there and wondered why would you do this?

you said you loved me, but i guess that was just bullshit...

see love heres how it is, i loved you and wanted to have your kids.

the minute you laid a hand on me i feared for my life now theres no chance in hell i'd be your wife...

speanding my days afriad i'd see you, afraid you'd hit me, afriad you'd be you.

No longer will i be scared because i now have something i lacked and that is strength, courage, and belief in myself!!

Reviews

[jumbie's #1 fan]

This is sooooooo good. I absolutely love it. This is the poem every abused woman needs to read!

[Vonnette]

Being hit by people who love you and you trust sucks. O.K. being hit always sucks. It just sucks worse from someone you love. You have a very straightforward way of writing that I relate to. I enjoy your poems. Good job!

[DANGER]

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