Who's the winnerA Story by Gabriel SchultzShort story describing the intensity of a race and whats the true purpose of winning.It evoked with a
swift breeze that came with leafs and dust. The dust bewildered and dazed their
eyes. They inhaled the glass like dust that entered their throats. Everybody
was constricted contiguous with no room to flee. There were at least thirty people
on the meager starting line. Sweat began to form into marbles on the back of
their heads. The sweat lackadaisically formed into droplet pearls that then
trickled off like when icicles melt. The droplets then hit the ground with a
meteoric splash of dust. They kicked their back feet repeatedly lifting the surrounding
dust into the air. Their heels nervously rocked up and down causing small rocks
to shift under their feet with every lift. Everyone’s arms lay
on their sides slightly angled. With one foot forward and one back with about a
two-foot gap in-between. Their clammy fingers twitched and fiddled as they
readied themselves. The stressful air was heavy that made the skin on their
heads wanting to concave. The fear and adrenaline traveled around and bounced
off one another. The intensity flowed through their veins. One looked down, and
stuck his lips out to be followed by a thick gunshot like spit that drilled
into the ground. Their knees were feeble
and palms were sweaty. They waited impatiently ready to jolt at any split
second. Time began to gradually plummet as the gunner marched to the anterior.
The gunners voice appeared faded in their heads and they watched his lips flap
in a circular motion. The gunner then said “runner’s ready” and lifted his gun
into the air. The next prolonged second later, he pulled his index finger down
and off the gun fired. The crack of his gun pierced their ears to react a ring
in their heads that sent an imaginary electric shock. Simultaneously they
all exploded forward with a thrust of a jet airplane out of the starting line.
Everybody started with a sprint then declined overtime to a slight lethargic
paced gallop. It was a fast race and the crowds were blazing. As they ran by
the crowds it appeared blurry, like looking through an opaque non-translucent
glass window. Their vision and perception was obscured. The wild stampede shook
the ground and created a sand storm of dust as they went bye. As the lap number
increased, their breaths did as well. Through out the race they all were
constantly crashing and banging against each other like bumper cars at
amusement parks. There breaths gradually increased from one breathe every five
seconds to four, to three, to two, and then to one. Posterior seven laps
complete they were now on their final lap. They brushed their tongue along the
roof of their mouths that felt like licking the skin of a lizard. There was one
man; he held most of his energy for this last lap. He was penultimate, almost
in last place now, with still a half a lap remaining. He accelerated forward
from a canter to a gallop so nimble that he couldn’t feel his legs moving. He
slowly conveyed to second place at the rear of the first place man. He was now
100 meters till the finish. His stride increased and his feet moved quicker. He
was way ahead of the other runners. It was between him and another runner at
this rate. They switched off by passing each other neck and neck and only a few
meters away. He was imminent to cross the finish line. The two were so tangled
while at such a high acceleration, gravity took its toll and together they both
fell. They tumbled dramatically smacking their shoulders and heads to the
ground, opening flesh wounds, and creating slight fractures to their ligaments.
They rolled to the
ground collecting dust all over them. He got up immediately being the one less
hurt. He had intersecting red lines all over his face, knees, and elbows. The
other one looked like he had sprained his ankle. He cringed in pain as he
looked up at him. He looked helpless, and without hope but it wasn’t his face
that expressed uncertainty, it was his eyes. He looked to the finish line and
nodded. He then glanced at the crowd with everybody on his or her tiptoes. They
had looks of suspense while clinging on to whatever they could. They watched
every movement of them. He looked back at his competitor. He picked him up and the
crowd cheered in respect and appreciated his philanthropic. As soon as the
injured one regained strength he ran to get first place. The other one was
extremely fatigued and because of his lack of strength he dropped at the finish
line with a timber in second place. © 2016 Gabriel Schultz |
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Added on July 6, 2016 Last Updated on July 6, 2016 AuthorGabriel SchultzScotts Valley, CAAboutIm 15 years old. I greatly enjoy writing as a hobby and possibly a career. I appreciate as much critiquing as possible when reading my work. more..Writing
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