Tension

Tension

A Poem by Michael
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Daily Haiku

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Tension stretched like strings
of a guitar - begging us
to make beautiful music

© 2011 Michael


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Very nice Haiku, you told a lovely story with just a few words. Nice!

Posted 14 Years Ago
I like this haiku. I don't love it. I like it. I like it because it is beautiful and poetic. I don't love it because I have a feeling the first line is missing something...
Good job anyhow.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on February 9, 2011
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Michael
Michael

Summerfield, FL



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Writing gives me a sense of purpose - it's what I do every day. When I'm not writing, I am thinking about writing. Here's to being published one day. more..

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