Her Eyes

First poem I remember writing.

When I look in her eyes,
Do you know what I see?
A beautiful, young girl
Just starin’ back at me.

When I look in her eyes,
Do you know what I feel?
An impossible peace;
How could I want to kill?

When I look in her eyes,
Everything is stopped.
When I look in her eyes,
Burdensome weight is dropped.

Her eyes are two portals

To worlds without sorrow;

Each night I close my eyes,

To see hers tomorrow.

Reviews

[Katie Lynn]

This is pretty excellent. You're a peach, you know that? You should write some more. Do iiiiitttttt.