Breathing Oxygen is not Living

Breathing Oxygen is not Living

A Poem by CookieMisfit1969
"

It is not enough to breathe oxygen

"
The venetian blinds are up.
The windows are open.
The sky is clear.
The wind is passing by.

Yet,
I still find it hard to breath.

© 2017 CookieMisfit1969


Author's Note

CookieMisfit1969
Sometimes, even though we're breathing, it would seem like life is chocking us to death.

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great philosophy told in simple words

Posted 5 Years Ago


i love this...so true...just existing is not living...
that is why i would never want to be kept alive on a machine...never.

Posted 7 Years Ago


CookieMisfit1969

7 Years Ago

Glad you can relate. Thanks

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CookieMisfit1969
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Hey there! Nice to meet you! CookieMisfit1969 here. I'm a 17 year old emo writer who keeps spouting nonsense when she write. Just a random kid you would bump at the street and don't spare another glan.. more..

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