My Wee Dolly
A Poem by
~Nina~
A small poem I wrote in my free time. Might not be that superior.
Your alabaster hands,
Delicate as porcelain.
Your glossy eyes,
Shimmer like stars.
Your full lips,
Red as a rose.
Your elegant dress,
Smooth as silk.
Your fine hair,
Golden as the sun.
Your velvet hat,
Petite as a young doe.
My wee dolly,
How I love you so.
Through the toughest times,
I shall never let you go.
© 2013 ~Nina~
Author's Note
Not the best, I know. Wrote this on vacation, so I did not exactly have all the time in the world to plan it.
Reviews
So simple yet so elegant. Thanks for sharing. Nicely done.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Very cute indeed...rose:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Very cute indeed...rose:)
Great job. Nice one.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Great job. Nice one.
Why I think it's a sweet little poem. Great job.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Why I think it's a sweet little poem. Great job.
It's sweet and girlie, we get attached to our dolls and they then serve us well to bring back sweet memories. Love the porcelain one's the best.
Posted 11 Years Ago
It's sweet and girlie, we get attached to our dolls and they then serve us well to bring back sweet memories. Love the porcelain one's the best.
When my daughter was born my mother gave her a porcelain doll she had had as a child. Now years after her death the doll stands in our home and is a reminder of my mother.
I think we all have those special toys from our youth that we keep and bring with us whreever we go. Almost as a talisman of innocence.
Thank you for this. Vivid, nostalgic, and well structured.
Posted 11 Years Ago
When my daughter was born my mother gave her a porcelain doll she had had as a child. Now years after her death the doll stands in our home and is a reminder of my mother.
I think we all have those special toys from our youth that we keep and bring with us whreever we go. Almost as a talisman of innocence.
Thank you for this. Vivid, nostalgic, and well structured.
11 Years Ago
Thank you, Steve, for the review.
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Added on June 5, 2013
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~Nina~ Manitou Springs, CO, CO
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Hello, everyone. Well, obviously, I have a deep passion for writing, and do it nearly everyday. In my lifetime, I have written many poems, short-stories, and novels, and I hope to share many of them w..
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