Bliss

Self-discovery through the imagery of a dream. (For the Masked One, whose essence lives in abundant clusters.)

Bliss

 

 

I sit
I wait
I see
I know
Awareness dies, and consciousness fades
I sleep
I dream
I fly
I grow
Though I know not the depth, through the Water I wade
I climb
I fall
I rise
I go forth
Bliss is the prize at the end of the line
I walk
I crawl
I seek
I look North
And when I have found it, true Freedom is mine

Reviews

[vanishing]

You bring the reader through
an ethereal envisioning of emotions
this witing has a select form
Brilliantly composed rhythm
Though I know not the depth, through the Water I wade"
taking risks for freedom's plight
to journey to the ends
of the earth for what the heart believes
Beautifully done, thanks

[Pointblank]

I absolutely adore this! All the effort to continue to move froward with optimism it seems. The positive of knowing you will find your bliss. Soething i strive for but do not own. Very nice.

[angelina neves]

Wonderful! For me, to give yourself the "premition" to do all of it is already "freedom"!

This is good. You seem to capture how a person acts and feels. I think this is one of the better free verse poems that I have read.

[Poeticpiers]

interesting theme presented in free form. True peace resides inside seek the quiet centre.Bliss is unsustainable for very long