"Tears and Love"

The day I lost my heart

Was the day you left me stranded.

You left me alone in a cold world,

No love beside me, no hand to hold.

You vowed your love, but where are you now?

Off in some long distance,

Leaving tears imprinted in my soul.

It isn’t fair.

 

I live off the memories we had,

Though beautiful �"they haunt me.

The promises we made, never parting.

I must leave them behind now.

They are worthless to me.

I’ll make new memories,

I’ll learn to smile once again.

I’ll learn to leave this kind of love behind.

 

Someone new will mend my heart,

The sun has found me,

The clouds have let me be.

And when my heart meets its other half,

I’ll give them all of me.

Reviews

[Hope Rose]

Hey, cheer up. Things will get better for you, believe me(not meaning to sound like a counselor here, so sorry if I sound like it lol). It may be hard now, but just pick something that makes you happy and enjoy it like there's nothing that is better. Words from someone who's been there, it works. If you ever want, or need, to talk, just message me. I'll help you through whatever it is troubling you, or I'll be the person you can rant to. Believe me when I say that I will be here, and I know there are more people who will be here as well. Just giving yourself hope, as you do in this poem, is a really good start. I hope things have gotten better for you. If not, just keep your chin up, the sun will prevail over the darkness. Keep up the good work with your writing. It's definitely nice to read. And, hey. Smile :)

[Jibin]

a nice work filled with little sorrow, but in the end it's just done with little hope.
:)

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

sad yet beautiful..nicely done!

[Muse]

painful, but written with beauty.............

[Helpless]

its heartbreaking how often tears accompany love but there is a quote from one of my fav shows Alli McBeal... i'm paraphrasing here. If you look back on a year of your life, and there were tears shed...whether for joy or sadness.... than it was a year worth living.

[ErinLovesYou<3]

Its sad, but it shows a new start, wish is good. Nice job.

[lostboy]

its good to know how to be in love...its good to know when to let go...its good to let go when we should.

[sugar]

hello new friend i loved this poem, it was beautiful. i enjoy reading and writing poems like that. cant wait to read more of yours :)

[TJ]

I love this...such a heartbreaking piece to start but in the end you show us that you will survive and move on from this heartache.

[silentpoet]

(I'll learn to leave THIS KIND of love behind).. that alone defined a love I once suffered from and now know I too will meet someone (Who will mend my heart)..lovely poem and emotion...very beautiful