"Selfish"

Am I selfish,

Is it selfish of me that i want her, and 

no one else to have her.
I want to be the only one she talks to.

The only reason why she smiles

She's the only reason I smile

The reason I laugh 

You should see her

She's amazing 

She'll take your breath away..

If you see her cry, you'll turn your

back to the whole world to see her 

smile again..

Is it selfish of me that I want her 

more in my life...

If it is selfish, say I am selfish...but the 

reason why is, I'm in love with her..

Author's Note

this is an old poem i wrote awhile back...i just found and decided to put it up

Reviews

[Frank]

Wow so clear! Very personal and a great message. I like this a lot.

[patricia]

Yeah I like this one, when love enters the scene so does possessiveness and insecurity. You express the affection here really well. Thankyou.

[trainwreck]

Good write! I was really impressed with your comparison to love and selfishness.

[Jibin]

Such a lovely piece and beautifully written. Heart touching write dear friend. Love this.
Thanks for the post!
:)

[ImagineItAll]

Great poem!!! I love the part where you wrote: "If you see her cry, you'll turn your back to the whole world to see her smile again..." You can feel the passion and kindness that there is from him to her.

[Melissa]

I enjoyed this poem..if this is the definition of selfish them im proud to say im selfish to :) Love is a powerful emotion

[Silent Knight]

That is beautiful. I like it. Very devoted love.

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

sweet and heartfelt, nicely done my friend.

[TJ]

A heartfelt and emotional piece. Bravo

[Miss Fox]

I'm sure the poem speaks to countless people. I know I don't want to share the one I love. It's such a sweet poem, and I'm sure whoever you wrote this for would be deeply flattered.