My Final Goodbye

we told each other we'll always be there for each other, and when i needed you most...you werent there..

I never got a goodbye from you..

The night we spent together was the best night of my life

I remember it clearly,

Your head on my chest 

Your hand in my hand..

Just like we always talked about

I thought how beautiful you look as I was holding you

I didnt want that night to end

 We kissed, we touched 

And i felt alive..

I knew we'll be happy..

But I never knew it was the last I will hear you say 

"I love you"

We messaged each other saying goodnight 

It was a goodnight,

But the morning wasnt 

I never got a call or text from you

Telling me how your day went 

If youre safe, so i wouldnt worry

And today I knew why..

You decided to leave me

I never got a goodbye

This is my final goodbye

Be safe always, live your life

Find someone new, someone who will love you, as I loved you

I love you, I just wish I got a goodbye from you and not someone else..

Goodbye my love...

Reviews

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oh gosh, those moments you spend together thinking oh how wonderful, never wanting it to end. But then for some reason it does, not knowing why.
This is beauifully sad
Nicely written, makes the reader feel that sadness, feel the questioning.
The ending was very good, mature.
Loved this sad piece

[KellieJeanne]

When I read this, each line hit me so strongly. Each line so beautifully constructed. It has so much emotion. I could feel each word as it left your mind and formed into a poem. So sad. But so lovely.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

WOW i have just relived THAT night.. i was with my ex.. you describe everything he and i did and talked about.. great work..

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Nicely detailed...it almost seems like you could also put this in a prose format. I really love the story you told.

[Coyote Poetry]

Those separations with no reasons or goodbyes leave us wondering for many years. I like the story. We need words of separation to understand and to have closure. A powerful poem with a sad story. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[rania]

I found this a very insightful seminar and one of the best I’ve been to in a while. Very good speakers and some great information and examples. Please do inform me of any other forthcoming Neighbourhood Planning seminars.
curt
Air Jordan 2

[Blood_knight3000]

wow. Very sad piece indeed.
Your poem is interesting in structure.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This story is a punch in the gut.
Truly a heart breaking piece.
You wrote with intense emotion.