"Memories"

The memories of you and me 

are the best thing i have

seeing you in my dreams

remembering the first time we met 

how i was awestruck 

the memory of holding your hand 

the memory of kissing you 

holding you close 

feeling your heartbeat  

They bring me peace in this hurricane

Just to find memories, of you and me

The memories are bittersweet

Plagues me with constant misery

Knowing they're just memories

Reviews

[Jeneeness]

this is ironic because I had never heard the song "Memories" by Weezer until I saw a video you made. lol.
anyway,
I like the line "Plagues me with constant misery" because i can relate to that. some memories I wish I didnt have.
great poem greg, you sensitive little s**t. :D

[Justin August]

Very honest piece about how good moments can become hard memories because of love. I like it a lot.

[Saswati Deb]

This poem is simple but yet so expressive of the misery of the lover.

[Spencer Barker]

Gregory, these may just be memories, but they sound like memories that certainly have made you feel a true love. You make this very apparent in this writing. Great job!

[Weeping willow]

Memories are sometimes the glue in our emotions that keep us from falling apart;-] Lovely and yet sad.

[lostboy]

sometimes the memories we have may be the best thing we have.

[KellieJeanne]

This is so sad, it's beautiful though. And it is a poem that I'm sure 9 out of 10 can relate to.

[200STM]

I like it Greg! Your very talented.

[Michael Jarrell]

Cheers to that. -hugs-

[Zachary_James]

Sad but good i can feel the heartbreak from this poem. I think you'll find happiness someday 100% GREAT WRITING.

[Ruth]

To know it is only memory is harsh but it is better to have memories than not, although, maybe not sometimes lol
This is hauntingly tender
xx