"All Along"

All along I've been looking for the one in 

the wrong places

How I fail every time

How long have I been searching

The one time I stop looking and open my eyes

I find a angel 

The one girl for me

The one i long for and only her

And that girl is you...

Reviews

[Blood_knight3000]

This is a very interesting poem... she must really be special...
You should try breaking up your poem a little more so that it flows more...=]
Other than that it is really good

[CryssinaKaiye]

she must be an extremely special girl.

[SarahCortland]

this is beautiful a great poem!