Ocean of Time

Gazing desperately into the sea

spindrift whispers but says nothing to me

screaming of solitude scattering time

a trilling voice speaks without verse or rhyme

Reviews

[Liverpoolfan]

Very short.
But also... veryy good. I'd rather that this was just one stanza of a much larger poem. This is quite well-written, but the rhyme in the second line is a little forced.

[Nicole]

short...but nice