She awaits

the struggle to success

She awaits me

On a path not yet traveled

It seems a distant chant sounds for change

Such loving cries, so out of range

But in the abyss, she awaits

(Yes, she awaits)

 

Out of the repetitive pattern, sheds fatal laughter

The tracks behind me hold past encounters

The imprints too deep

 It’s led them to find me

Oh darling, I carry such heavy Burdon

 

Honesty is not in me(x2)

I’m best left for the wolves

But in irony, I walk silently

I’m not quite tolerable

 

 

 

I take a step in full regret

At full extent the packs I led

It’s them who said, plain staind in red

I have gone off the deep end

 

And so now I bury the hatchet

Kill all sympathy

Ive changed for the better

And she still awaits me

 

But wait,  in the distance,

I hear a cold symphony

 

She awaits me

On a path not yet traveled

It seems a distant chant sounds for change

Such loving cries, so out of range

But in the abyss, she awaits

(Yes, she awaits)

 

 

Honesty is not in me(x2)

I’m best left for the wolves

But in irony, I walk silently

Reviews

[XX]

kudos! indeed it's nostalgic. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Beautifully penned.
Your piece has an nostalgic and compelling energy that sings of lost love and the aftermath.
Dark, distant and sadly lovely song.
Liked it.
Keep up the good work.

[Aero]

Thank you i appreciate it

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[Summer Daisy]

It felt like im reading the lyrics of a song...Am i right? Its beautiful

[Aero]

Yes it was a work in progress buy i decided to leave it as is. Thank you i appreciate it, you were my first review.