The matter of spirit and the spirit of matter 2

Inspired by Makosicas' poem "Untitled"

The matter of spirit 

I am sometimes sensed 

Yet not tangibly perceived

Existing entirely without form

I am the invisible life force 

Eternity is my endless design

Innocent essence of purity

I am as old as all that is

From the spark of creation itself

The attributes of the being

I am the untouchable things 

That you know and love

The spirit of matter

Hollow vibrating illusions

Creative impulses of light

The rhythm of the universe

Resonates from all you see

Manifested for you to touch

Ninety nine percent nothingness 

Becomes soft as the wind 

And as hard as a rock

 

 

 

Reviews

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Really really beautiful thoughts written here. I like how you wrote from Nature's/Creator's viewpoint. Last stanza is an awesome closer.

Excellent!

[Tony]

You create a powerful sense of the unseen yet ever interacting world that lives within us all. Last stanza hits you like a rock-- Magnifique!

[lackluster]

I didnt know Timothy Leary is a writing again.. hahaha glad to see someone writing in such a way. I dig it!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I will give a proper review later. I enjoyed it .. just have a headache.. so i will be back later.
Chloe

[EmpressPoetess]

Very insightful write that makes one think deeply about the invisible spirit and the visible matter, like ourselves. One truly compliments the other, doesn't it?