A Secret Never Revealed

When we met

 And I looked 

Into your eyes 

 I sensed your 

Soul tremble

 A sweet smile 

from a simpler time

 Will you tell me

Or will you keep it inside 

 A secret never revealed 

 

Author's Note

something with a love flair dawned on me so i jotted i will work on it

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I think the line "When I looked into your eyes I sensed your soul tremble" is a beautiful line. Better than sensing the body trembling to me .. a soul is far more attractive and important than a body.. which has nothing to do with your poem.. just thinking aloud..."A sweet smile from a simpler time" is also lovely to think of .
I think your jotting says so much without saying too much.

Chloe

[Nothing Personal]

These are dilly dallies we have all experienced but you have penned them down in a perfect fashion-- I adore its simplicity and yet its beauty..Oh you did it !!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was So beautiful! So few words but very special in meaning!!

[EmpressPoetess]

Your words here are gems to be treasured! So tender and deeply emotional! Thanks for sharing this!

Dee

[paul]

the line: 'from a simpler time' works very well here.

a simple, universal poem here : great

[Sunni Davis]

I found this simple yet captivating.

[floarealbastra10]

i agree it's a beautiful poem

[Tony]

Penetrating write--
reminds me of that saying the eyes are the doorways to the soul. A very captivating write as well-- excellent work!

[Karina Longo]

Short poems are an art for few - and you do it quite beautifully. I love it.

[Adam :P]

thats some beautifal writing!! so much passion in just a few lines!! amazing

[Brianna Brie]

Wow...so much passion in so few words. Nice write! I like the "soul tremble."