Another Sunny Day Gone To Spray

Another Sunny Day Gone To Spray

Another Sunny Day Gone To Spray

It Happens Here Almost Everyday

Planes Up High In The Sky

Making Clouds Before Our Eyes

When They Are Asked

They Won't Say Why

They Won't Respond

They Won't Reply

Some Have Said

To Grow Ozone

Others Say

It Will Ruin Our Home

We Know That Man

Needs A Cure 

For What He's Doing 

To The Planet Here

Spray The Skies 

Without A Test

North To South

East To West

Save The Planet

From Global Cooling

This Young Soul

You Won't Be Fooling

Reviews

[E.H. Monroe]

You got a real Bob Dylan beat poet, greaser on the back of a hot rod kinda thing going. This hit me like Rockabilly goodness. Not the content, because they never cared about the kinda thing, but the rhyme scheme.
We are tightening the noose around the planet my friend and when mother nature gets pissed, she's gonna s**t from the inside out.

Nice read

[OT]

ooo yes - I'm with EH - the rhymes are great here - the meter is strong throughout - the cure/here half-rhyme was intriguing - but I blame my accent haha - you got that 60s/70s feel going on - with a modern touch - I also like how you play with the rhymes - and speed them up (second stanza) and then down again - very nice!

[Stacey]

I really love the way the words flow in this verse and the message is clear! Amazing how we often take for granted the beauty of nature and never realize that in time (or in a moment) it can all be destroyed. Very thought provoking, lovely write!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great flow to an outstanding poem!

[EmpressPoetess]

Bravo! awesome write!