Not Me

It is not me

That you see

In the empty man

Going through the motions

He a mere shadow of himself

Angry raw emotions

 

Some day I will make a stand

When rage has left the man

His body rests too tired to fight

I will show my gentle sight

Within his heart I will live

Free of pride he will give

Love to all deserved

 

Author's Note

Just popped into the top of my head! Go figure?

Reviews

[OutsideSyntax]

Its amazing to think, that in our lives so small in comparison to the vastness that permeates within... we stop a moment to write a transcendant reflection upon the states we hold herein...

[Desert Dreamer]

I think we often find ourselves just going through the motions and it is time to take a stand and change our life.

[edie madison]

really like this. there's certainly a good amount of emotion in this piece that i think you can use to expand on this, i would love to read more. nice job!

and thanks for the review as well. (:

[Bette]

its good...