She

A sweet young lady I did see
She moved about so gracefully
Talking to the one she loves
She hopped about like a dove
Twirled and stepped
She wore a crepe
Yesterday I did see
She moves around so vibrantly

Author's Note

saw a Lady yesterday on her cell and her body language was so sensual I had to scribble out something

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Ohh i see these types everyday..though i may be not so interested
but some really catch your eye and senses from the first look
and i always say..there must be a difference between one and the other
its kind of like magic really..for some no mater how you were busy or worried
or the whole world was going in a different direction you never liked
even though ,she catches your eyes and mind ..and make you forget
everything for a while,who could say this is not magic..thank you young lady ,ha ha
i really loved the thought for i witness this everyday
lovely write..

[MMSzesny]

Hi,
Very light and flowing. There was a nice joyful feeling to the piece.
It has sort of a bounce to the whole thing.
Nice little write
Thanks for sharing.

[futurepast.]

I love the movements in this poem.
You can see the lady moving here and there.
Nice one.

[Crinkle°]

lovely and fresh!