When I Learn To Dream

I could not let myself Dream
When I was so young
My Dreams were too selfish
I always said with my voice inside

When I Learn to Dream

When I Learn to Dream
I will Dream of a world
Where all Souls can exist
Freely loving each other
As who they are

When I Learn to Dream
I will Dream of a world
Where all Souls can feed
And nourish their families
With food, love and time

When I Learn to Dream
I will Dream of a world
Where all Souls live for
The common goal of life
Filled with Love and Acceptance

When I Learn to Dream......

Author's Note

Please finish! An Interactive poem by me he he!

Reviews

[EmpressPoetess]

When I learn to dream
I dream of an earth wide paradise
a promise from God yet to be fulfilled.
when I learn to dream
I dream of all things made new
no tax, no rent, a free home for me and you.
when I learn to dream, I dream of all people
loving their neighbor as themselves
which is the essence of unity
which is the perfect bond of union.

[Courey]

Oh, this is wonderful :). I feel similarly.

[Calypso]

Well written. I love to dream. I believe its a good way to be inspired.

When I learn to dream, I put my trust in God. And pray He takes my hand, and leads me to the promised land! When I learn to dream, I pray to God and lean on His understanding! When I learn to dream, I keep an open mind and Keep God as my guide. For it is in God that I shall hide!!

[ScotchRoberts]

I really like the concept of needing to learn how to dream ... many do it "incorrectly" and it is thought provoking poetry that help relearn what you would think came naturally. Nice job!

[Kelly M.]

When I learn to dream no tears will be shed from those we love. Beautiful poem! I really was so surprised at this. I thought it would be different. :)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

How perfectly beautiful...............I will not finish because I think it is lovely the way it is....I love how open this is...unasking, uncriticizing, simply being

[Sammie]

When I learn to dream
I will be in a place
where children get to be children
Adults act like adults
And hatred and violence don't exist.

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. when i learn to dream ... i'll dream of being reunited with my soul mate ...

. p.s. ... thank you for this, greg ...

[Desert Dreamer]

when I learn to dream
I will find a land where
lost cultures are alive again
damaged lands have regrown
and greed no longer rules the human life.