This moment

This moment is the most important moment of my life!

This moment passed living in the past

This moment evapourated pondering the future

This moment is the most important moment of my life!

When i spent this moment living in the past, or pondering the future

Will i relive this moment, when i am living in the past in the future

This moment is the most important moment of my life!

Reviews

[JohnL]

It is a fascinating concept. I have read both poems and , whilst the philosophy contained about the 'now' moment is absolutely true, it is somewhat impractical - moments being so short and unable to delay the, perhaps more dire, future moments - but hey - that's philosophy for us.
There is however an outcome to be sought. What if, being conscious of the moment's security - we decide to savour and repeat the moment as oft as possible? Surely life becomes smoother? Whatever, our most important time is now. I have enjoyed this poem and your obvious deep thinking behind it.
John

[Mysty Rayn]

This really made me think. My favorite pieces are the ones that make me think. Well done.

[IPMONER]

its really your moment when you made this poem, at first i was bit annoyed with the poem's repetition of the word moment, but when i ended reading it i learned to love it

[Brianna Brie]

Interesting...it sort of feels like a riddle of words with much significance. Nicely written.

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

The possibilities of what to do with the rare spare moment. How best to use it, what it may, or may not produce. Good ponderance piece.

Cheers!
FF

[ReganFinch]

Hello there Greg. I really enjoyed the atmosphere emitted from this poem. It seems to have been written in a time of great zeal and joy.

I do wish that you would have been able to explain the attitude you were describing more, though (it is quite short). But, maybe, the artistic nature of this includes its short length. No one person has the right to question someone's art.

Overall, it was uplifting and unique. I enjoyed it very much Greg!

Take care!