Caged Soul

 

 

 

I was a caged soul

Empty and un-whole

Held and restrained

By thoughts of pain

That I know were untrue

What else could I do?

Emotions ran deeper

And I was their keeper

I discovered the capacity

To love everyone equally

 

And even now, that I am free

Hints of personality influence me

So if I appear aloof or withdrawn

I am sending love to everyone

And if you look up

A blank stare on my face

There is no smirk where the lips place

Look a little closer at my disguise

I am smiling at you with my mind and

Loving you with my eyes

 

This soul is now free

And forever it will be

 

Reviews

[Beth Wilcox]

This is a very beautiful, incredible, extrodinary poem.
It really opened my eyes and I could really feel the emotion that you were trying to set forth to the reader. I really enjoy your writing, it's all very well written. You have a fabulous way with words, and you use your talent which is wonderful. This poem is very inspiring and crosses a wonderful, important message to the reader. The title is a perfect fit, and that's why I chose it. It's interesting. Something I figured I can reltae to. Something many people can relate to . Very well written.

[flash]

Love the 2 line stanza at the end. Like the humanitity close at the end. Dark and free. Thanks. Enjoyed it.

[Lydia]

I really enjoy your message in this poem. It's great to let go of inhibitions, but the self-conscious part of us can hold on. True freedom is free of everything. Good write, and thanks for your review.

[the nothing]

I love the mixture of emotions, and the way you relate to your poem exelent write

[mjpink414]

That's a beautiful poem and I love the title. It has a very strong feeling.

[Sydelle Houston]

I chose this poem to read because of the title. What a strong, compassionate poem, I enjoyed it!

[Meredith Leigh]

Cool rhyme scheme, I love how you question yourself througout the poem as well. It adda a strong affect to the poem. it's strongly worded, and heartfelt. Full of emotion! Great work!

- Kriss

[Brianna Brie]

Emotions ran deeper
And I was their keeper
And even now, that I am free
Hints of personality influence me

Your work always seems to have a hint of wisdom and compassion. As a writer you seem to understand people well. Kudos on this.

[Dani California]

Ahhh yes! Wonderfully inspiring and insightful write. To set the soul free... with love. The ability to receive comes from the ability to give. Very nice! Love the meter and rhyme as well. :)

Beautiful.

[Belator Books]

I liked the line about appearing aloof and withdrawn. Not normally a fan of rhythmic rhyme, I nonetheless liked this piece for its honesty and for the simple method of writing down the conflicts within, to get them out. I also liked the part about the departing smirk. Nicely done.