Just Called

This is about an old girlfriend that i lived with over twenty years ago and i was convinced i was over her but i realised that even though i had freed myself from her memory there were some unresolved feelings that i had to deal with, now we are friends a

 

I just called to hear your voice

And to tell you of my choice

To Let go and be free

Of the feelings inside of me

I need you, to let me know

Can we share each others road

Many years since I seen your face

I returned to that special place

My emotions were firm and strong

For oh so very long

I thought I was free of you

And what your Love can do

When you hold me in your arms

I feel your warmth, and your charms

And I sense your sweet energy

Like water, it rushes over me

I never want to let you go

Please choose and let me know

I never stopped Loving you

When I hold you, I see it's True

I can no longer live a lie

I need you by my side

At night I hope and pray

That you will feel this way

My Love is Always for you

No matter what you do

And whenever we must part

I feel my breaking Heart

And I look forward to the when

I can hold you in my arms again

 

Reviews

[Emily B]

lovely emotions. . . I hope the feelings were well-received

[Dani California]

This is very beautiful, Greg. Wow. Love is an amazing thing. "Twenty years ago, I saw you yesterday... "

Nice meter and rhyme scheme as well. Lovely work :)

[HeavensAngel]

Be honest with her, tell her how you feel before its to late.

[Phibby Venable]

wonderful!! the sense of longing & the emotions are easy to relate to
and well said.

[Brianna Brie]

I feel your warmth, and your charms
And I sense your sweet energy
Like water, it rushes over me
I never want to let you go

Love the pure honesty of this one. Sure do hope you are just as forth coming with her, but as relationships go often we are not. Beautiful write!

[Sel Whiteley]

This is a simple and direct poem. And one I can relate to. You vividly capture the idea of a love you've put to the back of your mind but as soon as you see that person, you're weak with the chemistry again. The rhyming couplets really help to frame this.

[Carrie Montgomery]

i could really feel the power of your love and the eagerness to start over with an old love that never left your heart. this is easy to relate to: no hidden message- just straight forward and hits you in the gut! Great job!