Rings Of Smoke Inspired By BrightEyes

 

As I watch, my rings of smoke

Your sweet words, rise to my throat

From my heart through throat to mind

These descriptions are rare to find

Your vivid images, create pleasure

This emotion, I will treasure

Your depth of expression is pure, and true

So with this poem, I Thank You!!!! 

 

Reviews

[Drew Wade]

hey, I like this poem. I like rings of smoke and I'm glad someone finally wrote about them. I envy the person who can blow a smoke ring. The only bad thing I have to say about this poem is that I think sometimes you use commas too much. but nothing wrong with the wording or the rhymes.. nicely done.

[BrightEyes]

Thank you, Greg. This is a very sweet write and I am touched. We put our words upon the pages to hopefully touch another soul, so this means a lot to me.

[T]

Absolutely beautiful, Greg ...

I absolutely adore the first two lines. Something about them really gets me. Good job!