At fault

A short work written on a whim. Feel free to judge and share your opinion!

Like a passerby
Caught in a downpour
Throbs my cold heart
Wet from your tears

Turning into a sponge
And refusing to dry

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Short poignant and expressive despite its brevity. Not always easy to be expressive in such short poems so nicely done Sir says I.

[Greenhorn]

Thank you, much appreciated!