Nothing is Something

self explanatory...

Nothing is something,
I'm something to me.
Treat me like nothing,
I fall before thee.

Leave me with something,
I feel so alone.
My insides have blackened,
my heart turned to stone.

Living to perish,
there's death in the air.
Going down slowly,
but still you don't care.

Nothing is something
believe when I say,
I know I'm the something
that you gave away.

Reviews

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

I really, really like this piece. Just keep your head up and let nobody drag you down. I learn that from experience.

[Frantzuu]

Awesome poem, great message and it feels very personal. :)

[Seshat Nidaba]

I like your message and personal tone.

[Antonio Valentino]

Nothing is something,
believe when I say
I know I'm the something
that you gave away

Something, and something relevant and deserving :))

Great poem!
Antonio

[Siddhartha]

simplicity is divine...lucidity and brevity combine to deliver a masterstroke...peace...

[Moflo]

I love how you can make such a profound poem out of such simple rhymes and a simple rhythm. Your wordplay here is fantastic and I think the poem definitely conveys the emotions you were aiming for. good job!

[hannahspelledbackwards]

I feel this exactly. We always seem to have the same problems! haha i really like this one. its simple, short and to the point :)

[Jim Parson]

Hey there, oh green one! Where ya been?? This is great, as usual, but you knew that.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i am putting this in my favs as well! i adore this! beautiful emotions!