Red

The color red represents love and also bleeding to death.

Red is the color,

red is my life.

Love is the feeling,

blood on a knife.

 

Red is the color,

red are my eyes.

Constantly hurting,

stop with the lies.

 

Fire with fire,

love is a game.

Red is the color,

red is the name.

Reviews

[Siddhartha]

A wonderful poem about a colour that signifies love as well as death...Impressive...

P.S.- A minor glitch for I think that in the second line of the second stanza 'red is my eyes' should either be written as 'red are my eyes' or 'red is my eye' though poetic license ultimately lies with you, my friend...

[GreenSkeleton16]

the NAME of the GAME is Love :)

[Rendawg]

yours brilliance is so overwhelming hope your still writing

[Kyle]

Simple, yet expertly put together.

[Steve]

You are good! I must say too many at this site do not have this ability to maintain my interest with such a short attention and all......

[OT]

ooo a very red poem haha nice!! I love the rhyme of it, sing song like - red is around us! closing in!!

[Kelley]

But wait RED is my favorite color.....smiles
This was a great poem thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Moflo]

The similarities between the color is an interesting concept. I love your flow and your rhymes are perfect. Good write.

[Jim Parson]

Hmmm...love and bleeding to death. They are kinda the same thing. I can feel the emotion in this, green one. A fiery write with perfect rhyme and meter, of course.