Hell Fire

Hell Fire

A Poem by GreenSkeleton16
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Dedicated to the animated movie - The Hunchback Of Notre Damn

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The fire it dances,

the warmth covers my skin
The danger excites me
as my resistance grows thin


My interest awakens
never to die
The fire it flickers,
as wind passes by

The girl in the fire
seduces me so,
The flames lift higher
I watch from below

Seeing her move
wanting her kiss
The lust of the fire
I can not resist

Seduction takes over
with passion of lust,
The heat of the fire
decays into dust

© 2011 GreenSkeleton16


Author's Note

GreenSkeleton16
I love the song Hell Fire from the movie.

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this is very pretty and of course as your others flows perfectly of the tongue

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm feeling the heat...I'll be careful not to get burned! This is one of my favorites of yours, and there are so very many. And i used to love watching that movie with my daughter. Esmerelda is HOT!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely written. I like the rhyme scheme and the pacing, again. I also really like the description in this one...very vivid images. Nice job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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GreenSkeleton16
GreenSkeleton16

Arlington, TX



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My passion is Music. My heart is poetry. My mind is spiritual, and this earth needs love. more..

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