Hell Fire
A Poem by
GreenSkeleton16
Dedicated to the animated movie - The Hunchback Of Notre Damn
The fire it dances, the warmth covers my skin The danger excites me as my resistance grows thin My interest awakens never to die The fire it flickers, as wind passes by The girl in the fire seduces me so, The flames lift higher I watch from below Seeing her move wanting her kiss The lust of the fire I can not resist Seduction takes over with passion of lust, The heat of the fire decays into dust
© 2011 GreenSkeleton16
Author's Note
I love the song Hell Fire from the movie.
Reviews
this is very pretty and of course as your others flows perfectly of the tongue
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I'm feeling the heat...I'll be careful not to get burned! This is one of my favorites of yours, and there are so very many. And i used to love watching that movie with my daughter. Esmerelda is HOT!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I'm feeling the heat...I'll be careful not to get burned! This is one of my favorites of yours, and there are so very many. And i used to love watching that movie with my daughter. Esmerelda is HOT!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very nicely written. I like the rhyme scheme and the pacing, again. I also really like the description in this one...very vivid images. Nice job.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Very nicely written. I like the rhyme scheme and the pacing, again. I also really like the description in this one...very vivid images. Nice job.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on January 8, 2011
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GreenSkeleton16 Arlington, TX
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My passion is Music. My heart is poetry. My mind is spiritual, and this earth needs love.
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