Shifting Sky 2

Written to my friend John after he broke up with my best friend.

Gray sky shifted into blue,
no more sorrow to get through
Heavy heart has lost its weight,
blue eyes faded, no more hate

Slowly breaking all around,
it found another to bring down
Darkness spreading, heavy heart
her whole world has fell apart

All this happened cause of you,
blue eyes shifted to someone new.

Reviews

[Siddhartha]

A nice little poem this is...Has a natural rhythm and tone...Keep the good work up...

[Jim Parson]

You amaze me! Just sayin'.